Headline Copywriting Tricks the Pros Don’t Want You to Know

Headline Copywriting Tricks the Pros Don’t Want You to Know

Do you want to learn how to write headlines that convert?

Then you’ve come to the right place.

Almost three quarters of users on the internet pay attention to grammar and writing more than you think.

That means if your headlines suck, you’re not going to make any money.

So, let’s fix that.

Today I’m going to teach you how to write headlines for articles, ads, social media, and other channels. They all cross-pollinate, so interweave their strategies as you find necessary.

What is a headline, anyways?

A headline is the title of an article, newsletter, or other piece of content. It is the first thing that a reader sees, and arguably the most important component of copywriting because of this.

Forbes headline example

But, a headline isn’t just a string of words.

It’s a medium to catch the attention of anyone that reads it, drawing them in to read the first sentence.

From there, the first sentence makes them want to read the second sentence. The second sentence sends them down a slippery slope until the end of the copy.

You should put a good amount of energy and time into writing a good headline. I’ll be teaching you some formulas and proven strategies to write ones that convert and increase click through rates(For online material, at least).

Headline copywriting strategies

Let’s jump right into the juicy stuff, and I’m not talking about steaks.

These are effective copywriting tactics that you can use to craft amazing headlines.

Use a sense of urgency

A psychological study in 2012 found that urgency made individuals act quickly while thinking less at the same time. A.K.A, the perfect headline strategy!

The key is to be conscientious of your target audience, though. Some times urgency backfires and will actually produce less favorable results.

Imagine you were selling home alarm systems, and these were two headlines you were considering:

  • “Buy Now Before Your House Gets Robbed or Broken In To”
  • “Buy Now to Keep Your Children Safe and to Have Peace of Mind”

Which headline do you think would be better? I would argue the second one. Urgency is good, but too much urgency can have the opposite effect.

Scarcity

It can also be used along with the sense of scarcity. This is a simple trick to make customers act faster in fear that they will miss out. Here are some examples:

  • “Only 8 Tickets Remaining, Gets Yours Before They’re Gone!”
  • “50% Sale Ends in 24 Hours”

Check out this weekly ad from Amazon.

Amazon weekly discount

They offer a discount code and a date that it expires by. This is a classic e-commerce approach to using scarcity.

This is easy to implement, and of course, it has to be truthful. Don’t lie that a sale or time sensitive deal is occurring if it isn’t.

Look at companies like Adidas. They intentionally limit certain footwear or products, because it naturally creates scarcity. There isn’t enough to go around, so demand shoots higher than the moon.

Do you manufacture your own products? Consider releasing a limited edition product or line of items to test this for yourself. Add some urgency into your headline, and you have the golden ticket to more sales.

Avoiding mistakes or unpleasant situations

No one wants to keep running into the same problem.

David Eagleman, a neuroscientist at the Bayor College of Medicine has spoken about and researched this extensively.

He’s stated that negative situations cause us to take action more quickly. How can you use this in a headline? By stating the reader’s problem, like this:

  • “Still in Student Debt? Learn How to Pay it Off in One Week”
  • “5 Ways You’re Ruining Your On-Page SEO Without Realizing It”
  • “Stop Making These Content Marketing Mistakes Today”

Use exact numbers or stats

Tell me what sounds better:

  • “Learn How to Start an Online Business”
  • “Learn How to Start an Online Shoe Business in 24 Hours That Can Generate $247/Day”

The second headline is much more effective. It uses numbers to make it more descriptive and believable. This also aids in the reader understanding exactly what they are getting into, while the first headline is vague and could mean anything.

Internet marketing guru Neil Patel shows how to pull this off effortlessly. And no, I don’t mean that shirt.

Neil Patel headline example

Use a concept or anchor

A copywriting anchor or concept is when you attach the main topic to an external force, such as:

  • “How The Germans Took Over SEO”
  • “Get Your Girlfriend Back With These 3 Texts”

In these examples, the main topics are SEO and getting your girlfriend back. But to make it more exciting, you add an anchor(3 steps) or a concept(The Germans).

For the first headline, the article might detail how German marketers found secrets to Google’s algorithm and it exposes their strategies.

The second one would give the reader three templates for text messages they can send to their ex.

I love this example of concept copywriting from the watchmaker Omega.

Omega watch headline

This watch model, the Speedmaster Moonwatch, was worn by astronauts that went into orbit. Thus, the “First Omega in Space” is very literal and makes an excellent concept headline. I would’ve done something like “One Step for Man, One Step for Omega” 😉

Headline copywriting formulas

I’m going to include a swipe file at the end of this article, but these are some formulas you can use to put together your own headlines.

They are fill-in-the-blank style, so include your own topic, product, or ideas.

  1. Never Before Seen Insights into ___
  2. 10 Secret Tricks to ___
  3. Are You Making (This Mistake) That’s Leading to ___
  4. What ___ Doesn’t What You to Know 
  5. Things We Learned From ___
  6. Myths You Probably Still Believe About ___
  7. Read What This Expert Has to Say About ___
  8. How I Increased My (Metric) by ___
  9. Do You Know These ___ Strategies?
  10. Stop Doing ___ to Improve (Metric)

Let’s also look at some literal formulas — copywriting equations you can flesh out for yourself.

Pain + agitate + solve

A classic copywriting formula. I use this constantly and it’s never failed to deliver great results.

While it truly shines when used for social media or articles, it’s a killer headline strategy, too.

The idea is that you take the paint point of a customer, agitate it, and then solve it. Here are some examples:

  • “How Your Fear of Success is Delaying Your Dreams and What to Do About It”
  • “Can’t Think of Article Ideas? Say Goodbye to Writers Block With These 5 Tips”

Before + after + how

This formula involves stating the current situation of the reader, what it could be like when improved, and how to get there.

It’s effective because it instantly tells the audience what to except from diving into the rest of the copy.

Buffer example

Kevan Lee’s social media post shows how you can use this formula in the real world.

As a marketer, I understand that social media images do take a fair amount of time to create. I don’t know about you, but when he says we can cut the design process from 1 hour into 15 minutes, I’m sold. It tells me exactly what I’ll learn from clicking his link, and speaks to my existing experience.

The 7 deadly sins

No one is perfect. We all have our vices and make mistakes.

Remember that time you forgot to buy your little sister a birthday present and she cried?

As a copywriter, you can take advantage of this.

The 7 deadly sins aren’t just a religious teaching, but a very applicable copywriting angle. Let’s take a deeper look at each of them.

Lust

Everyone desires something.

It could be attention, money, a nice body, or anything imaginable. You should know your customer well enough to have a grasp of what they really want.

This dating book is a good example.

Tao dating book

Note how the headline reads “Guide to Being Absolutely Irresistible”. It’s playing on their target audience’s lust for love, attention, and affection.

It doesn’t just say “How to Be Attractive” but rather is appealing to the over-desire for men to be swooning over them.

Consider what lust your customers have and how you can intertwine it into your writing.

Gluttony

This sin is described as hoarding things for yourself. Do you remember this Lay’s commercial? I saw it all of the time as a kid.

The whole campaign is literally about not being able to have just a single chip. It’s one of the best ways gluttony has been used in marketing to date.

These are a couple of headline examples with this strategy:

  • “Make So Much Cash From SEO That You’ll Make A Money Bed”
  • “Look So Good That You’ll Make Every Woman in The Room Envious”

Greed

One of the easiest 7 deadly sins to pull off in copywriting, and it applies to many niches and verticals.

Does your product or service help the customer to generate more money? Then, bingo!

You have the perfect opportunity to craft headlines that speak to peoples greed. But, don’t let that deter you from using it for other products.

Some individuals believe that having an abundance of health is being truly wealthy. Others might think the same for family, friends, or travelling.

The general idea is to speak to their innate need for an abundance of whatever they seek.

Sloth

The reality is that not a lot of people want to put in hard work.

They want the rewards and glamour right now.

Not in 10 months, or 10 years, but in 10 minutes.

If your target audience has a knack for being impatient, it’s a great quality to target in your headlines. You see it all of the time.

“How to Get the Girl in 10 Minutes”, “Fix Your SEO in 5 Quick Steps”, or “This 15 Minute Trick Will Get You Ripped” are all simple, but real world examples.

Examples of greed in headlines

Check out these YouTube headlines. People use them for one reason — because they work.

Wrath

We all get a little angry some times.

I bet you still recall the last time someone cut you off in traffic.

Anger and similar feelings are powerful emotions, and mix perfectly into copywriting. Consider these headlines:

  • “Get Back At Your Friends Who Said You’d Never Be Rich”
  • “Take Down and Fight Against the Corporations”
  • “Don’t Let the Man Tell You What to Do”

Envy

This is a two way street.

You can use envy in your headlines either to make readers feel it themselves, or communicate how they will make others experience it. Consider the difference between these two examples:

  • “Everyone Will be Watching You When You Drive The New Ferrari 488”
  • “Learn How to Stop Wishing You Had Clear Skin With Our New Cream”

Pride

People want to feel good when they buy a product or service.

They want to know that they are getting the best of the best.

Have you ever regretted a purchase? Try to avoid that with your customers.

You can apply this deadly sin into your headline by mentioning that the content it contains is secret, rare, only for experts.

This way, readers will feel special when they consume it.

How to write headlines for articles

Do you write blog posts or similar content? Then you must take the time to write a good headline, as it will increase click-through rate.

A higher click-through rate results in more traffic for your website or landing page, and can give a nice boost to your SEO.

WordStream found that higher ranking websites on Google tended to also have higher CTR’s. Coincidence? I think not.

CTR and rank position

Editorial style

Shoutout to Buzzfeed. They are the first publication that comes to mind when I think of clickbait titles.

Editorial titles are ones like “You Won’t Believe What Happened Next” or “This One Simple Trick Will Shock You”.

Buzzfeed headlines

You practically can’t escape these titles. Writers use them because they promote curiosity and emotion — the perfect cocktail for headlines.

Use Why or How to start the headline

Using one of these two words in your article headline are good emotional triggers.

They are normally followed by guides, strategies, or tips on something useful, like “Why Your Marriage Isn’t Working The Way You Want it To” or “How to Start a Business for Under $50”.

Throw in a recognizable name

If your article is going to involve interviews, quotes, or similar features, this is an easy one.

Mention the name of a famous or credible individual in your vertical.

Imagine that you saw an article titled “Obama Says Icecream is Gross” — you’d probably click it because it’s a universally recognized name.

How to write social media headlines

Writing headlines for social media involves everything that you’ve learned so far.

Citing stats, taking advantage of anchors, agitating problems, and all of the other tactics all work.

Here’s the biggest problem that I see writers making on social media, though.

They don’t use calls to action.

A beautiful headline is nice, but you need to tell the user what to do next. Which in most cases is to click a link.

Using a call to action

You don’t have to overthink a call to action, either. They are basic.  Think “Click now”, “Learn here”, or “Click the link below”.

When you are writing a social media headline, I’d also recommend asking a question. This gets other users to engage, gets them invested into the conversation, and also attracts other people.

Copywriting headlines swipe file

Alright, I promised you that I would induce a headline swipe file and here it is! Fill in the blanks and interchange the words as needed.

  1. Your ___ Doesn’t Want You to Know About This
  2. You Can Get Ripped in 15 Minutes by ___
  3. Would You Like to Have ___ ?
  4. World’s Best ___ Teaches You How to ___
  5. Why Are You Doing ___ When You Can Be Doing ___
  6. Are You Still Doing __ ?
  7. Have You Ever ___ ?
  8. What The Taxman Won’t Tell You About ___
  9. The Secret That The Banks Are Hiding
  10. What Every Beginners Needs to Know About ___
  11. Every Beginner ___ Makes These Mistakes
  12. Every Pro ___ Has These Habits
  13. Turn Your ___ Into a ___
  14. Too Busy ___ to ___ ?
  15. 5 Things You Never Thought About ___
  16. Tired of ___ ?
  17. If You’re Reading This and Do ___ Stop Right Now
  18. The Ugly Truth About ___
  19. What Nobody in ___ Wants to Speak About
  20. The People Who Did ___ Became Millionaries
  21. You Won’t Believe How ___ Works
  22. Sick and Tired of ___ ?
  23. Own The Business Of Your Dreams While Sleeping in Until Noon
  24. No Phones – No Staff – No Meetings – Just Pure Passive Income
  25. New Super Food Tested by Navy Seals Just Revealed
  26. Man Who Spent 3 Years In a Wheelchair Now Runs Five Kilometers a
    Day
  27. Improve Your Grades in as Little as 5 Minutes a Day
  28. I Discovered How to ___ Now I’m Revealing
    My Secret
  29. How to Use ___ For ___
  30. How to Turn ___ Into ___
  31. Are You a ___ ?
  32. Are You Still Tying to ___ ? Then You Need ___
  33. $500 Per Day With Just $20

Carmine
Hey! I'm Carmine, along with this agency, I run Pierro Shoes, Wisetech Report, and Mastro Digital. I've also self published several books on internet marketing. If you need web design or writing services, contact me at any time.

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