6 Epic TV Commercial Copywriting Examples + Main Takeaways

6 Epic TV Commercial Copywriting Examples + Main Takeaways

Does anyone watch TV these days?

We’re all on the internet.

We’re all on our smartphones.

You get my point.

Despite this, television is popular as ever.

In fact, did you know that there are over 1.2 billion households in the United States with televisions?

Number of televisions in the United States

Hence why it’s such a great way to advertise and reach customers.

That’s why today I’m covering television copywriting examples and their main takeaways.

Follow along.

What is a TV commercial copywriter?

TV commercial copywriters are writers who specialize in writing advertisements that appear on television.

The commercial itself is handled by a separate team that works intimately with the copywriter.

Although, they will brainstorm together to come up with unique advertisements and creatives that help sell the product.

The copywriter will then write sales copy that supports the visuals and product.

In some cases, the copy may be generated first to inspire the process.

That brings me to my next point.

TV commercial copywriting examples

Time to look at some famous commercial and the fantastic copy that accompanied them.

I also included main takeaways you can apply to your own copywriting projects.

1. Apple’s 1984

Okay. Super excited to show this one.

I mentioned it in my Apple copywriting article because it’s EPIC.

Hands-down one of the best TV commercials of all time and the copy at the end is incredible.

Give it a watch:

To recap, the ad shows a woman in a track uniform and Apple tank top running through a dystopian world that’s dark, scary, and filled with clones.

They are mind-controlled by a giant screen that is a reference to Big Brother.

You see, this was around the time when the dystopian novel 1984 became famous.

People were spooked.

They were nervous about adopting new technology and the potential security and privacy risk it could bring.

The woman runs up to the screen, throws the hammer, and frees everyone from the spell.

That’s when this copy appears:

On January 24th,

Apple Computer will introduce Macintosh.

And you’ll see why 1984 won’t be like “1984.”

Apple wanted to break the idea of technology being a bad thing and help consumers see it’s positive.

Oh, this commercial also generated millions in sales. 🙂

Main takeaways

  1. Tie your advertisements and copywriting to events, news, and mainstream media to reach a large audience.
  2. Position the product as revolutionary or new.

2. The famous Shamwow (and Vince, too)

We’ve all since Vince.

We’ve all seen Shamwow.

Did you know that it’s one of the most successful infomercial products of all time, though?

Yep!

While Vince handles explaining the product and its benefits, there’s also some good copy that supports the commercial.

Let’s zoom in on a few spots.

Firstly, the pricing.

Shamwow pricing

They clearly tell viewers that they will receive four Shamwows for the price of one. What a steal!

Next, they give customers a better deal by upping the ante and offering eight Shamwows for the same price.

Shamwow amount

They throw in a free mop that’s valued at $20, creating a further value proposition and reason for buying.

Shamwow free

The end screen is perfect, too. It clearly displays what the customer is receiving, an upsell, and a simple URL.

Shamwow end screen

Main takeaways

  1. Clearly state how much of a product the customer is receiving for what price. Avoid vague offers.
  2. Give discounts or deals to drive revenue.
  3. Make upsells and value propositions very clear to maximize conversions.

3. The Snuggie (yes, really)

This is another classic.

The Snuggie was a full-body blanket that apparently did very well because the same commercial ran for years.

Although I’m happy that I never saw anyone wear one. 😂

During the commercial, text runs at the bottom of the screen reading things like “Use your hands!” and “Use your laptop” communicating it’s very practical.

Blanket with sleeves

The “Ultra-Soft Fleece” is also mentioned as a value proposition. After all, no one wants a blanket that feels like sandpaper.

Ultra soft fleece 1

But, wait. there’s more!

Snuggie upsell

Snuggie throws in a free handheld light for when you’re reading books while in your Snuggie.

Notice how it has a very similar format to Shamwow?

Because it works.

Main takeaways

  1. Show people using the product so customers can emotionally see themselves using it and be more likely to buy.
  2. Provide as much information about the product: how it can be used, what it does, what it doesn’t do, etc.
  3. Upsell, upsell, upsell!
  4. State what makes your product so unique compared to others.

4. Hydroxycut weight loss

I swear I’ve seen Hydroxycut’s commercials since I was a kid.

They have been killing it in the weight loss industry and here’s one of their best performing commercials:

In particular, let’s break down the copy.

The first part of the commercial focuses on showing before and afters of customers.

This creates hope for viewers while providing social proof and stimulating an emotional response.

Hydroxycut knows that its customers are insecure and concerned about weight, so they push it hard.

Hydroxycut

Next, they provide more social proof and cement their authority by stating they are “America’s #1 Weight Loss Supplement Brand.”

Hydroxycut social proof

Then, copy appears stating “Lose Weight Your Way” while cycling through various products.

The copy resonates with the idea of people hating strict diets and wanting to eat what they like while still shedding pounds.

Hydroxycut end scene

The end screen continues this but adds the various stores the products can be purchased at.

Main takeaways

  1. Show before and after photos of customers using your product. Case studies, testimonials, and reviews work just as well.
  2. Build authority by showcasing any awards, achievements, or accolades.
  3. Clearly state where customers can purchase the product.

5. Apple’s iPhone SE

I’m more of an Android or Blackberry kinda guy, but Apple makes great products.

And, we all know that they like to release a new phone every week. 😉

So, here’s the iPhone SE:

This commercial nails the principles of showcasing product benefits and giving real-world examples.

It states a feature than shows it being used. Simple as that.

For instance, it begins by focusing on the small 4.7″ design.

iPhone SE size

But phones tend to have similar features, so they also concentrate on their new A13 Bionic chip. A.K.A something you can’t get anywhere else.

a13

Other features they touch on include 4k video, fingerprint security, camera lighting effects, water resistance, battery life, and more.

Overall, they know what Apple customers care about and put that at the forefront of the commercial.

Main takeaways

  • Focus on the features that your customers care about the most. Study them through questionnaires, surveys, reports, and other data.
  • List at least one feature or component of a product that customers can’t get awnyereh else.
  • Show the product being used.

6. BetterTrades stock trading program

2008 was an interesting time.

The crash of the U.S. economy made many people interested in stocks, business, and wealth-building to protect themselves.

That’s where BetterTrades came into the picture.

This infomercial promoted a stock trading course that customers used to make up to $1 million/year.

Check it out for yourself:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rSiiVIx665I

The infomercial shows one of the seminars held by educators.

This gives viewers an idea of what they will experience if they attend it themselves.

All throughout the commercial you have social proof like this:

Better Trade social proof

It shows a regular guy like you and me who makes tens of thousands of dollars with this program.

BetterTrades also uses non-stop calls to action to make viewers engage.

…one of which is for the BetterTrades expo.

Better Trade CTA

This gets people into the funnel and one step closer to being sold on a high-ticket product.

That’s also why BetterTrades offers free lead magnets like this in the commercial:

Better Trade free bonus

It’s amazing to see the fundamentals of copywriting and advertising used so simply.

There’s nothing overly fancy or new about what they’re doing.

It’s because it just plain works.

Main takeaways

  1. Don’t be chintzy with calls to action. Use them as much as possible to promote engagement and create motion.
  2. Offer free resources and lead magnets to get people educated about your product and ready for the upsell later.
  3. Hold physical events if possible as people need to be high buying temperature to attend.

Final thoughts on copywriting TV commercials

Yeah, we have social media, email, smartphones, and all that jazz but we can’t forget where we came from.

Television remains as one of the staple ways to drive awareness and sales.

Otherwise you wouldn’t see them anymore to begin with!

The commercials I touched on today are great examples of strategies and techniques that work. And really well at that.

There are commercials that run for years because they move the needle so much.

Some of the main practices include:

  1. Displaying a clear unique value proposition.
  2. Showing the product being used by real people.
  3. Creating an emotional connection with the audience.
  4. Using plenty of calls to action.
  5. Adding upsells and cross-sells.

Whether you’re producing a commercial or another copywriting project, use these tactics to improve performance.

Feel free to contact me if you need a commercial copywriter or enroll in my courses to learn more.

Carmine

Hey! My name is Carmine and I'm a Toronto Copywriter that's written for Neil Patel, Dan Lok, GoDaddy, and more. I've helped clients generate $100k+ in MRR, 400%+ organic traffic, and 100%+ MQLs. I'm also the Co-Founder of WiseMedia, a law firm marketing agency.